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Rock Painter: All right everyone quiet please. Settle down please, I'm trying to work here. Gran, I can't have you there...You've got to move to the front here...there, next to Mum, lovely. Big Sis, thank you so much but please move back to where you were in the first place. Trunk, fill the gap...There's the gap. Work with me people. Cavegirl I can't have you there. Behind Larch, Treetop and Volcano. Right behind there. Excuse me...Thank you very much...and...big smiles...Perfect...Now hold that for two days please

[Rock Painter starts painting on rock. Tribe is getting bored, Dad is snoring]

Mum: Oi!

Dad: I'm having a power nap

Mum: It's not as if you've done any work in the last week

Cavegirl: Last week? Last year more like

Dad: Any more comments like that from you young lady and you'll go straight to your cave

Cavegirl: Yes please

Mum: She's right. You never do any work. Who fetches the water?

Cavegirl: Me

Mum: Who milks the goats?

Cavegirl: Me

Mum: Picks the oogli fruits?

Cavegirl: Me

Mum: Skins the hogs?

Gran: Me

Mum: Gets the firewood? Catches fish? Cooks, cleans, weaves, bakes...me!

Rock Painter: Could you keep still please?!

Dad: I'm the one whose got to delegate. It's a very special skill

Cavegirl: (in dad-mocking tone) Cavegirl, fetch the water...How do you do it dad?

Dad: Ooo listen. Although it may look like I don't do stuff but I do loads of stuff. All over the place. You'd soon feel the pinch if I wasn't here I'm tellin' yer

Cavegirl: Actually, the reason you don't do anything is...you can't

Dad: What? Yes I can

Cavegirl: Prove it then

Mum: She's right

Dad: I, I, I, I, I see yeah yeah yeah ganging up on me now are we? Um, I'll take you on. Give me a job, I'll do it

Cavegirl: OK. Milk the goats

Dad: Goats...milked. Doddle. Follow me

[Everyone leaves]

Rock Painter: Now if you could just...this is why I hate tribal paintings...drives me mad. I don't think this kind of hack would work anyway. I...am...an artist. I, I have a vision. I don't just...paint. I, I, I, I, I, imagine...yaww



[Dad struggling to get close to goat]

Cavegirl: OK, forget the goat. Wash up

[Dad manages to drop and smash bowl]

Cavegirl: Right, forget it. Fetch the water

[Dad gets skin stuck at the top and falls in well]

Cavegirl: Moving on then, fruit picking

[Dad throws big rock into tree as tribe scatters]

Dad: Well, it's been a very educational day. I've helped out around the camp

Cavegirl: And proved how useless you are

Dad: I'm just a bit rusty. It's been a long day. I suggest we all get some sleep

Gran: Sure you know how to do that?

Mum: Remember, you just lie down and close your eyes

Big Sis: And breathe in...and out

Cavegirl: Actually Dad you've got to admit that's quite funny

[Amid laughter, Dad leaves the village]

Dad: Fine. If they don't need me, no problem. Last thing I'd want to be is a burden do anyone



[Village]

Mum: Well who needs him anyway?

Cavegirl: Yeah, here here

Mum: OK, that's enough standing and staring. Back to work

Cavegirl: Hang on. Who's giving the orders all of a sudden?

Mum: I'm the new chief. Aren't I? (laughter)

Big Sis: Um I think not. I'm the first born

Trunk: Yeah, well I think it should be me

Cavegirl: You're not family

Trunk: Yeah but I've got natural charisma

Roast: Ah no me, I've got natural charm and...the ability to heal divisions

Trunk: Heal divisions? Heal this then big nose

[Trunk punches Roast, Big Sis goes flying. Cavegirl goes to help Big Sis and picks up a piece of bark]

Cavegirl: OK everyone. How about we all go away and mark our little pieces of bark who we each think should be chief. I'll count them all up and the one with the most wins



[Voting time, tribe line up to vote with bark]

Cavegirl: (to herself) Isn't it great to be present at a watershed moment in civilisation. It's all going so well, and this is just the beginning.

Cavegirl: I hereby declare, the winner with a hundred and seventy two votes is...me

[Gran starts the applause]

Stiks: Hail to the chief, hail to the chief

Big Sis: Cavegirl, any chance we could check the votes?

Stiks: You heard what Cavegirl said. She went for a nap in her cave, a sabre tooth tiger came in and ate them while she was asleep

Cavegirl: Thank you Stiks. Now can we move on?

Cavegirl: (to herself) So I'm in charge...brilliant. Over to the younger generation for a change. This head of the tribe stuff is just a breeze

Big Sis: You've surprised me Cavegirl. Everything seems to be working. Dad's a dinosaur and you've proved it

Cavegirl: Thanks. For it's time you got off your backside and did your bit

Big Sis: I don't think I heard you correctly

Cavegirl: Look. I'm starving. Find out when they're going to bang the lunch drum

Big Sis: Aren't you forgetting something? You're the boss now. You can decide

Cavegirl: Oh yes



[Cavegirl bangs the lunch drum]

Cavegirl: Being chief is cool

Stiks: Bit early isn't it Cavegirl?

Cavegirl: Who cares? We eat when we feel like it

[They only find bones in the larder]

Cavegirl: Who's cooking today?

Trunk: Er dunno

Roast: You didn't tell us to be cooks

Cavegirl: Couldn't you have decided amongst yourselves?

Stiks: That's your job

Cavegirl: OK...Mum then

Mum: Oh sorry, I cooked yesterday

Cavegirl: Roast?

Roast: Er, day before

Cavegirl: Stiks?

Stiks: I covered for Treetop and Volcano when they had fever

Cavegirl: Gran?

Gran: OK

Cavegirl: At last

Stiks: Um, we'd rather not have Gran

Cavegirl: What!

Stiks: She overcooks the vegetables

Cavegirl: Alright, I'll cook...Er, what do I cook?

Trunk: Oh, well it's Thursday, mammoth

Cavegirl: Where's the mammoth?

Stiks: Dunno

Cavegirl: Right. Any volunteers for hunting?

[babble of many excuses]

Cavegirl: OK, we all go. That's fair isn't it?



[Out hunting, bringing home the mammoth]

Cavegirl: (to herself) This is not as easy as I thought

Cavegirl: OK, I killed the mammoth. That's my bit for today. Now it's down to you lot to cook while I clean up

Stiks: OK, I'll prepare the fire. Leave it to me

Cavegirl: Oh thanks Stiks

Stiks: But I'm not getting the kindling wood

Cavegirl: What?

Stiks: All that bending down

Roast: And the splinters

Trunk: And I got the firewood last week

Cavegirl: OK, listen up. Roast and Trunk get wood. Stiks and Tooth get flints. Mum, Gran and Big Sis, clean the trough and peel the veg. Treetop and Volcano skin the mammoth. These are your tasks which will rotate on a fortnightly basis. That's...an order



[Tribe sat down at pile of wood]

Cavegirl: Ha OK, all we've got to do now is light it, well?

Trunk: Oh don't look at us

Roast: That's the chief's job

Cavegirl: I see. Right. OK then. Pass the flints

Big Sis: Dad will know how to do it

Cavegirl: Thank you both...so much

[Cavegirl unsuccessfully strikes the flints]

Cavegirl: (to herself) Now I know what if feels like. If I hadn't 've told Dad he was useless, he never would have gone. Right. There's only one thing for it



[Cavegirl sets off to find Dad, homing in on his snoring. Cavegirl finds him fast asleep in a cave. A few minutes later, Dad has a fire going and is sharing food with Cavegirl]

Dad: It's all in the layers. My old man used to say, twig branch mulch, branch mulch twig. Light in the middle. Blow, poke a bit, blow, poke a bit and there you are

Cavegirl: Come back and do it for us? Please?

Dad: Only if the entire village...including your mother...comes up here...and apologises



[Village]

Mum: Never ever ever. We don't need him. We just haven't tried hard enough. Oh we can work together on this can't we?

Big Sis: I know, whoever gets the fire going first...wins a prize

Trunk: Oh what sort of prize?

Big Sis: Er, a fruit basket

Cavegirl: I've got a better idea

Trunk: What?

Cavegirl: First person to get a fire going gets to take over as chief

Big Sis: What? You don't want to be chief any more?

Cavegirl: It's not really my thing (applause)

Mum: On your marks...set...go

Cavegirl: (to herself) Excellent



[Fruitless fire-making]

Gran: I remember when I was young, my mum and dad never had fire

Big Sis: So what happened?

Gran: They died. Like what's going to happen to all of us. We're all going to die. Starve slowly 'til our ribs are poking out...and our tongues are swollen and black

Big Sis: OK Gran, we all get the point. We're all going to die. Great



[In a nearby cave, Cavegirl has got a good fire going]

Cavegirl: (daydreaming to herself) Dad may be a snorer, Dad may be gross, and he may be bossy...but, he is my dad



[Village]

Cavegirl: None of this is working. Why don't we all apologise to Dad and bring him back?

Big Sis: No. Are you mad?

Mum: You know Cavegirl, I'm beginning to miss his snoring...but I'm not going to apologise



[Later at Dad's new cave; tribe gathered, Dad chewing on a leg of meat]

Dad: What was that again?

Mum: Really, really sorry

Dad: Naa, didn't quite catch that

Mum: I'm really, really sorry

Dad: Aaaand the rest of you?

Ensemble: We're really really sorry



[Tribe back posing for the tribal portrait]

Cavegirl: So here we are, all together again. One happy family, one happy tribe. And that's how it should be

Mum: You got a real kick out of that rubbing my nose in it, and in front of all the others

Dad: I did actually, yes. And...as it happens, I had a really nice time out there in the wild without you, nagging me, day and night

Mum: Why don't you go back there then!

[Both put on grins for painting]

Rock Painter: Perfect!

last updated Jan 7th 06

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